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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-12 09:44 PM

You can keep your well oiled beefcakes
Who have a peanut for a brain
Walking egos complete with muscles
Forever searching for fortune and fame

Such a man is only capable of loving
The image in the mirror he sees
Give me the heart and soul of a poet
His tapestry of words are sure to please

A poet writes of love from the inside
Opening his heart for all to see
Such a master he is at creating
A veritable symphony for you and me

His words will sweep you off your feet
And raise you high above the floor
As you are carried away with the moment
And come back begging for more

He is the king of all things romantic
As he paints from his palette of words
Of two lovers who walk in the moonlight
As feelings of passion and yearning are stirred

His poetry will set your heart in motion
As your heart soars on the wings of a dove
Whilst he captivates your being
And fills your heart with images of love

Suetang

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-02-12 09:48 PM

What can I say about this poem..I think you
have said so much truth in this...I feel
this way too....Thank you for posting a poem
that touches me...

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

2 posted 2002-02-12 09:50 PM

And the same goes for a poetess!!!! Great poem Sue and I agree, it is the heart of a person that gifts him or her their worth!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-12 09:52 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always touch my heart, this is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) May we all sing to our hearts content in poetic rapture, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-13 12:48 PM

What if the poet is also beefcake or semi-beefcake?
Just a random thought

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

5 posted 2002-02-13 01:33 PM

Sue, Bravo!!! Only airheads would want a "beefcake"... They would bore the heck out of me. Now a beefcake poet?!....that may be a different story...lol. Either way, romance will win me over shallow looks anytime. Great poem!

Love,
Bonnie

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

6 posted 2002-02-13 09:01 PM

I agree!!

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

7 posted 2002-02-13 09:04 PM

SUe.

Marvelous.

~~Jeff~~

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