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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Stop I cry about the waste of earth And care not for your place of birth. Nor do I care your color skin For I know mine is just as thin. Its time to stop the greed of man I know there is a better plan. I also know we’re not same But that cannot be made to blame. Apocalypse rides rampant power There is no need of babbles tower. Each man can do his very own Within a temperate and happy zone The pay will be an ample life And with the minimum of strife Man should look upon each other As a sister and a brother. We all posses a little Kane A microscopic part of vein It lives as part of every goal It is a part of every soul. We either face the simple truth Or change will change the world forsooth. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Seymour, I couldn't agree with you more, my heart cries out to all the hatred among mankind in the world, and I wish we could all make peace to one another and treat each other like siblings in Gods arms! (big hugggssssss) So heartaching but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amid the chaos and the din comes a feeling of sacred kin here among the pages blue I search for all the words of You for if there were a sagacious teach that keeps me from the hoary breach where black is blacker all the while I find my peace within your smile for all that you would pen, my friend, is fraught of all sincere, so heed my thanks for yet this bend that I would hold so dear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the read and wonderful comment. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is so true, Sy, and so well stated .... even though we have that little bit of Kane in us, we are Abel to overcome by reaching out with love and compassion to each other. nice job!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Sunshine, I thank you for the wonderful poetic response. You brighten the gray of my day.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, You don' favor me with your comments to often but when you do you make me smile. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
....simply bows to the master of rhyme No need for words on this one Seymore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
If only...~~sigh~~ Well said Seymour, and powerfully provoking thoughts penned magnificiently here. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I share in your concern,...this is touching. *Peace. |
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marya2 Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36 |
this is my first comment, been reading like forever, boy did I get scared, I got to the screen you know, to reply? and I look up and see the word STOP ......ROFL anyway, I like this....but you scared me marya |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour I love this, so much truth, with just a little bit of work from each one of us the rewards would be remarkable. Nice write, floriaFloria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dulcinea, Yes if only, thank you. SpitFire, Thank you dear. Marya, LOL didn't mean to scare you, Thanks for the read and comment. Vandana, Thank you. Floria, Yes, thank you, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cry about the waste of earth And care not for your place of birth. Nor do I care your color skin For I know mine is just as thin. ===================================== The pay will be an ample life And with the minimum of strife Man should look upon each other As a sister and a brother. We all posses a little Kane A microscopic part of vein It lives as part of every goal It is a part of every soul. ====================================== OH but I do so love the skin youre in  *L*sorry Im late me Stinkylove... I been setting up the new puter  thank you for the view thru wise eyes mans crimes told in rhymes ... Mother Nature loves poets the most ya know. LOL Me too Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I love this! Truer words have not been spoken. ---------- We all possess a little Kane ---------- Indeed we do. Lovely write! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
 Very nice job on this one, Sy... Man should look upon each other As a sister and a brother. We all posses a little Kane A microscopic part of vein It lives as part of every goal It is a part of every soul. Well said! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Glad you got your new puter. And hope you didn't have any trouble setting it up. Thanks for the sweet answer. WW R S Tennessee Angel, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Madame C, Thank you |
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