Open Poetry #18 |
The Angels Came ............for a friend unknown. |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The Angels Came The angels came with tears in eyes To quietly take a Mother's prize A fine young man his soul released I pray now only for his lasting peace My tears they flow without refrain At least I know he has no more pain A road too long, a search for relief A family left behind to cope with grief Left once again to count the cost To such good people, and such a loss But the world goes on, turns from afar And brings to sight a bright new star We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, this is so touching, a beautiful way of saying goodbye. I loved it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eddie..its so hard to deal with loss...any loss....but losing my child--i cant even imagine what that must feel like.... very nice write my friend... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eddie, this is so sad but beautiful, my heart cries out to their loss and I pray with all my heart that they can feel deep down that his love is always with them and He will grant their hearts promises that love shall find a way always for them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
It's amazing how something can be both so sad and so beautiful at the same time. May God bless and shed some peace to this young man's family. ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (02-13-2002 09:22 AM).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Eddie,...your heart is so full of love and concern for others and I admire that. This is just beautiful, though heavy with the loss. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eddie....your own wings are in view...along with your kind heart...this is a tender lovely tribute to all envolved and also to the special friendship that created this special bond. As they say...."touched by an angel" I knew you would write something...as we have come to expect this kind of sincere devotion from you, you always come thru...and because you are a poet... a fine one at that. heart-hugs jm Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Eagle. I know first hand what you speak of, Losing a child is so very hard, floria Floria |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful. I would like to think we become stars after we die. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A loving piece. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How beautifully you have put this Eddie. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you, Eddie, for this beautiful verse for a courageous fight for life for a young boy. I have tried to put words on paper and I seem to wash them away. Thank you for sharing the words from your heart. take care, ME |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
At this point in time words simply fail me... Your thoughts are, and will be appreciated, thank you! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The day that I read this first my emotions were much to out of control to reply here... Your words touched places very deep within my heart and I felt that today...the day I'll say good-bye to Shane...would be the day to reply to this...to remind me that I'm not saying good bye...rather remembering the good times with him and the simple fact that his memory will go on...always and his small hand touched so many people and brought us together...for that and so much more...he will be cherished...always. Love to you my friend, and thank you for your constant display of heart~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
His memory shall always live on the hearts of those he touched dear friend. You take care! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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