. . . guilty of sensuality . . . Tanka

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-11 01:49 PM

body heat for two
essense of synergism
multiplicity
we are guilty as can be
charge us with lovely union

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-11 01:51 PM

oooh this tanka is perfect! You've said it well!!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-02-11 01:51 PM

Interloper, love your vocabulary in this peace, it just flows.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-02-11 02:07 PM

guilty of loving
as our hearts and souls unite
sweet crime of passion
as we fan the flames higer
taking delight in our guilt

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-11 02:17 PM

RosePetal ~
Gee, thanx

strbbux ~
I've been told I run off at the mouth

SEA ~
you've given me life
convicted me with my words
the sentence given
undiminished love
eternally loving you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2002-02-11 02:47 PM

I take all the blame, gulity as charged. I love it.

SEA

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Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-02-11 02:53 PM

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2002-02-11 03:24 PM

There are worse crimes, Interloper.

At my age I just get charged with "Assault With a Dead Weapon"!

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

8 posted 2002-02-11 03:29 PM

What guilt? What crime?
This Love sublime?
'Tis riches beyond measure
Enjoy! Enjoy! Both girl and boy
This wealth in newfound treasure.
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-02-11 03:45 PM

Ha, you are not a bit guilty

I don't know the tanka form yet, or I would answer accordingly.
Sandra

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2002-02-11 04:09 PM

Don't know who you're seeing on the side but keep up the good writing! Lovely!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2002-02-11 04:15 PM

Walker ~
Ok, love for life

SEA ~
I can't do that

Balladeer~
That's a limp excuse

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2002-02-11 04:18 PM

Silver Streak ~
Sure. Check out Songs of Solomon and Proverbs 5

Catalinamoon ~
Not ... guilty? Why not? I try real hard

ethome ~
On ... my ... side? Any way I can

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

13 posted 2002-02-11 04:21 PM

Interloper,

I love your tankas and haikus. The are so beautiful

So well done

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

14 posted 2002-02-11 04:22 PM

rosepetals25 ~
Tanka you very much

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

15 posted 2002-02-11 04:28 PM

Oh, that was GOOD!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2002-02-11 04:37 PM

Balladeer ~
You don't think I stretched the thought a little bit?

DayDreamer99
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

17 posted 2002-02-11 04:40 PM

short, to the point my fave

lol *smiles evily* i mean...im a perfect angel..*is smiling evily* haha byes!
Tifferz

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

18 posted 2002-02-11 04:55 PM

Interloper...I've always loved your tankas...among other things...

Yes! You are guilty as charged of sensuality!

LOL@Balladeer's comments!

~Hugs sweetie, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

19 posted 2002-02-11 05:03 PM

No crime in the sensuality of love, sweet man...I am glad you are guilty of such....for that is what it is all about...**big hugs**

I love it...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

20 posted 2002-02-11 05:04 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, it is always such a delight to read your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) Maybe sometime we can write a senryu string together, I would love to work with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

21 posted 2002-02-11 05:26 PM

Daydreamer ~
OK, if you say so ... Glad you liked it.

Enchantress ~
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like my offerings. You got me embarrassed and I can't "talk."

Startime ~
You sure know how to boost a guy's ego

Noah ~
Send me an Email and we will duet my friend.
Keep it up, the check is in the mail.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

22 posted 2002-02-11 07:16 PM

Interloper~

sounds like a lovely dance....beautiful and sensual....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

23 posted 2002-02-12 10:02 AM

Greeneyes ~
Thank you very much

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Temptress

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Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

24 posted 2002-02-12 12:48 PM

Well, I have to say that this one is lovely, and given this name, I am often charged with that sort of crime, Sir..but I enjoy it.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

25 posted 2002-02-12 12:50 PM

Temptress ~
{grins}
Go figure

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

26 posted 2002-02-21 03:27 AM

So charged...James

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