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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Write You breathe another sings one just whispers You walk one talks another goes a straight line We are one You climb I rhyme one by one nothing goes undone Hello goodbye here we are by, and bye I gave you give we live you lie I strive one dies we live Give it back give it on live as one to live, undone Be one Now comes sweet the trust take, if you must I will just give so I may rightly live Now is the time to see the rhyme in what I write For I am right in what I say In the I love you this very day In the take of you loving me which I give back, you see…. For I will only give in what I write for it is how I live…. and someday someday I will write Like Rod Or Simon, Perhaps, Gibran… Whatever, I shall go on…. for I, Write Repost 02.14.01 revised 02.12.02 |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very nice, Sunshine!  sky |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, you certainly do write..and didn't I already tell you how much you remind me of Rod?  Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And YES...you certainly do..and someday...I do believe you will write like them... Excellent Kari... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Yes you do, and you always write soooo beautifully, for your quill always shines with sunshine! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true queen of words to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sahring!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
well..darn..I should say you write..and wonderfully I might say, Madame. I love this! For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yes You certainly do write my friend |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Give it back give it on live as one to live, undone" "Write" you do my dear ... and very well. Much enjoyed the flow throught Karilea! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~And I read,...because reading you leaves me with something, everytime. (I learn a lot from you in quiet ways). *Peace you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my eyes touch they consider they close to capture the unsaid enjoyed it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Gibran was one of favorites, enjoyed |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very well written. Short lines lend intesity and this works quite well. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart. You know I love this darling heart it is utterly utterly one of your best Kari writes and the world reads her right Kari speaks and the world sees her light Kari listens and the world halts its spin Kari writes the words that live within Kari writes the sun and sheds its shine Kari writes indeed she writes just fine    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea-- You are friend til the end you care you share  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and we read and in your words we learn the lessons that you teach us from your walks through the plains we see the things that you have seen before in your time and the things that we have yet to see in ours we read and in that reading we remember that it's the writing that makes us read ourselves please. . . continue to write. . . so that we may continue to read and be amazed. . . wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Or just write like yourself, which should be good enough. You write well, Karilea, a true and most gifted poet. I hope you never doubt that. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You certainly do write,Karilea...and you do a fine job of it too!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
yes, you do ... beautifully Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely,sunshine,i liked it |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice write indeed sunshine, floria Floria |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You climb I rhyme one by one nothing goes undone Well done, Sunshine! Cor |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Karilea! I am so grateful that you write! Write on! |
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