Let’s Have A Poetic Affair (My Valentine)

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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-12 01:23 PM

Let’s Have A Poetic Affair

let’s have
a poetic affair
intermingling dreams
and phrases to share
ah to be caressed
by your tender words
a feeling only known
to flying birds
to understand language
spoken or written
within your text
I am totally smitten
we shall rise above
the lines of communication
a romance of bliss
of our own creation
making love
in the ecstasy of verse
our words, our thoughts,
our souls immerse
from sundown to sun up
we shall rhyme
a captured poem written
between the lines
and we shall never tire
words of old are still new
I become a verb
to have a poetic affair with you

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-12-2002 09:10 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-02-12 01:28 PM

What a lovely descriptive poem. Sounds like a perfect scenario.
Sandra

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

2 posted 2002-02-12 01:34 PM

Hello My Lady,

I must say that this poem was beautifully constructed and the scheme immaculate...you have definately outdone yourself...I expect nothing less than this perfection from here on out...LOL and the ending...

"I become a verb
to have a poetic affair with you"

Just an awesome ending...which is the hardest thing to do. End a great poem exceptionally. Bravo

J~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-02-12 02:52 PM

Oh yes. this is excellent, Lady!

Stunning power and passion in this from you.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-12 03:10 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may your heart forever sing with true love and may you forever be embraced in an eternal poetic affair with your sweetheart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet frind, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!