Open Poetry #18 |
Goodbye my dear, you're not welcome here |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Was that you in the corner of my mind suppressing bad memories and bring out the love the kisses the passion deceiving my heart Was that you showing up after all this time Giving hope to this undying love that has last after all the loss the pain the tears If it was you goodbye my dear you're not welcome here |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Good choice, and poem!! There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and the pain you feel! I hope now your heart has been anewed with true love and joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Strong...assertive...in control...well done. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yep, sometimes you’ve just got to stand your ground, though, it’s not always easy. Well written piece about the struggle and the resolve. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sometimes we will do anything for someone we once loved....except love them again. and there are some who don't love but doesn't want the other to love anyone else.. wise words, walker.... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
why are the knocks on the door so late, without understanding the why's and wherefores of the past? well well done poem about never returning to past pain. tSR |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
there are some people who will say things or do things to mistreat a true love, not treasuring it as it should be, often blaming the other which can result in poetry like this a heartfelt write, here love i send to you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Was that you in the corner of my mind suppressing bad memories and bring out the love the kisses the passion deceiving my heart Was that you Love might be lost, but it should never be stifled. There really are no exceptions to rule, love is what it is. Great poem Walker! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That's the spirit! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
walker, Good plan! Painful...but good. Cool write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* My heart goes out to you...I know this pain well...You have put it so very well...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you're a powerful woman! I love this poem, and I like the way you take your heart back! |
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