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The Decision
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The Decision |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tis sweet relief to finally rind my thoughts are now aligned with my aching heart’s desire in this decision of mine Sleepless musings swelled as I tossed and turned awake now it is just physical action in the next step that I take I gave up trying to figure out what everyone wanted from me I looked within my longing heart and found courage to be free A soft smile now lights my face calmly I see my future goal I’m moving on, leaving here for the goodness of my soul |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
You are very lucky my friend to have been able to hear your soul speak and to listen. I am so happy that you can find a smile and that you will now be able to enjoy the journey of your soul. You are truely special, Big Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Our hearts always know what path to take, all we have to do is listen....Beautiful poem and message!!! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Poet deVine, sounds like you made the right decision. All I can say is: Does it matter what another soul thinks? When drowning, dying, in our own dark sinks We must be free, eternally, free, free! To love ourselves and share our ecstasy. In any kind of bondage we are slaves There is no right or wrong in these enclaves For we are owned by circumstances, sin So free yourself, release all bonds within. Good for you! ((Poet deVine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I gave up trying to figure out what everyone wanted from me I looked within my longing heart and found courage to be free A soft smile now lights my face calmly I see my future goal I’m moving on, leaving here for the goodness of my soul ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful write here Sharon! Such a good feeling when we come to that moment of realization. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This could be about destinations in any form at all, Lady. I love this soo much!  beautifully and simply said. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nice clarity in this. Decisions don't always come easy, but once they're made there is a sense of calm and relief. Makes me think I need to stay focused on the issues at hand. Starting tomorrow! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oohhhhh...I love it, sweet Sharon, your gorgeous words always touch our hearts, may we always believe in our dreams and look to the future, living each moment with joy until we saee our dreas come true before our very eyes happily! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
when that moment of truth comes when you've been struggling with a decision and at last, you finally KNOW what you need to do and make that move to do it, it is like reaching the peak of a mountain and finally seeing what's on the other side.... the feeling is powerfully dynamic and it is not only a great relief, but a new awakening... and you said it so much better than i could... this is a great piece, sharon!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sharon...me thinks that you have always been one who knows what she wants and what she has to do to get it....nice poem my friend. Sometimes the hardest decisions are the ones we already know the answer to. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and now. . . the Action. . . excellent. . . powerful words. . . very honest and open. . . I like it. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sharon - I too looked within my heart and found... I used to be like every soul Who thought kitty cats were cute. But now I'm free to be just me, And give those cats the BOOT! heh - Actually, I like your poem a whole lot better. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
To thine own self be true, I am happy for you, to find that you must lead the life that you need and that God intended for you. Lot of truth in this. floriaFloria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Enjoy the journey Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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