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Where Would I Be
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Where Would I Be |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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What would my life be without you there? Would this heart still beat, will I care? Where would I go, what would life be? For you are my life, my soul and destiny. Could I ever write another word of rhyme? Would my tormented mind find the time? Shifting sands of love upon a desert dune, blowing away beneath a saddened moon. Shards of broken heart fading into the sea sinking to depths of despair and insecurity. Pain in the silence of a love that is once lost. Stove in from a tragic blow at such a cost. Love me or leave me, for I cannot share this bed of love from a hard lonely chair. For if that is not the choice that you choose I will say farewell in a song of lover’s blues. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) With a loving heart like yours, love will never leave your heart, sweet friend, for she will always be so happy to love such a caring and loving person like you! (big hugggsssssss) So bittersweet and beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barr, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh Barry....just take her in your arms and kiss her with all the passion and love that fills your heart. She will ever be yours....gosh this poem touches the heart...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, You nailed it! Life and love as I see it. Awesome. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Magnus~ Wow... what can I say? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Could I ever write another word of rhyme? Would my tormented mind find the time? Shifting sands of love upon a desert dune, blowing away beneath a saddened moon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hugs, Deb |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, decisions, decisions...keep writing, sharing, and when need be, we'll do the caring... good one, Magnus... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, when you write the blues the women cry and the men sigh. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is such a heart touching poem. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus this is totally breathtaking. I love it, such passion and such devotion, truly this is sooooooooooo beautiful As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So romantic, it's perfect. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, I guess I'll have to tip my hat to you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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