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rebekah33
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0 posted 2002-02-10 01:31 AM


Spinning round and round,
Pulling and pushing his world,
into and from my mind.

Embracing each moment.
Embracing him within my heart.



"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-02-10 06:25 AM


Nice dance...I hope you don't get too dizzy.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



strbbux
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2 posted 2002-02-10 09:55 AM


Very nice rebekah, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

peaches73533
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3 posted 2002-02-10 09:58 AM


Rebekah,
Very nice.Hope it's a nice dance.
peaches

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-11 12:07 PM


two hearts embracing
dancing to the tune of life
for eternity

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-02-11 01:36 PM


around and around
two beating hearts
the only sound!

Nice!!

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6 posted 2002-02-11 07:04 PM


kettledrums of love
warbling to a lovers sigh
kismet pirouette



(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooo breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, may loves joy forever fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-19 11:57 AM


Rebekah~
This is stunning imagery~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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