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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-12 10:09 AM

“AT THE BAY”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Awoke at dawn and went
for a walk, it was
puzzling at first not
knowing where
I would go…

Wanted to see something,
anything, which would
remind me of you,
whom I miss more
than you know…

Don’t really understand
how I could feel this
way, especially about
someone I’ve never met,
yet I do…

Ended up at the bay,
where it was peaceful,
and romantic, somewhere
I would take you,
once we meet…
~~~~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-02-12 10:11 AM

She will love it, I'm sure

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-12 10:43 AM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and sigh! (big hugggssssss) This Valentines Day and everyday after, may you take her to the bay hand in hand and forever share the sunrise and sunset and the stars with her, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-12-2002 10:44 AM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-12 11:57 AM

Sounds like a lovely spot Bill....I would love to see it.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-02-12 12:02 PM

Wanted to see something,
anything, which would
remind me of you,

That's such a nice line BC~
There is a certain calm and peacefulness
down by the bay where we can let our thoughts drift upon.

marya2
Junior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 36

5 posted 2002-02-13 11:16 AM

tell you what, this is romantic, now
I;d like to read a follow up report on this okay?

been shying away from love poetry lately but this is the week for it (yech) so I dabble a bit here and there!

marya

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-02-13 12:02 PM

enjoy

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-13 12:08 PM

Plans are all made, Now just find her Bill. I wish you luck.

Nice poem, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-02-13 05:45 PM

Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly one of the best you’ve ever written I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

Now go out and get her darling boy, you have the moonlight you have the bay, what more do you want? Go and get her kid, she’s waiting I know it I

You are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself.

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

If you keep writing like this I shall start running out of superlatives and that would never do would it?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

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