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Your Valentine
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Your Valentine |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Your Valentine I am sweet grapes bursting from your vine. Pluck me squeeze me age me savor my fine aroma imbibe me. I will make you feel divine. I am your wine, Your Valentine. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) May you forever suckle the joys of love with your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Whoa...now that was romantic and sensual and all in just a few lines...Well done! [This message has been edited by Dulcinea (02-13-2002 02:55 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving words. May you and your Valentine enjoy the day, in sweetest love. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Dulcinea! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice and creative Newell. thank you floriaFloria |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very clever and sweet! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sodpossom, for your kind words. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Aged to perfection, Newell......beautifully written.... Thanks for sharing it with us.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
mmmm tasty, sip with me! Madame Chipmunk always has the perfect pics in her replies!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Yes I know I always say that but then you always write to utter perfection. I wouldn’t have to say it was absolutely perfect if you didn’t always write so well would I? No exactly If I were the cup would you sip at me? With your lips would you caress me? Touching lip to cup to set me free Giving and yet taking in all of me If I were the cup would you drink of me? Say yes you would and liberate me This is awesome writing    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sweet Noah for you loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Madame, for your sweet words and your beautiful picture of me, LOL.. You are very wonderfully gifted with an ability to find just the right picture for the right thought. And you know what they say, Madame, a picture is worth a thousand words. May I offer you a sip? ((Madame Chipmunk)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 02:09 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sip with you? Why Joanna, I would be utterly delighted! Wow! ((Joanna)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl, If I were the cup would you sip at me? With your lips would you caress me? Touching lip to cup to set me free Giving and yet taking in all of me If I were the cup would you drink of me? Say yes you would and liberate me. You are free! You are free! I liberate thee! All through eternity I would sip with thee In ecstasy; forever free We'll dissolve into a mist As wine and cup become a kiss Would I drink of thee? O yes, come to me! Let us sip and kiss; Let us both be free! You say the most beautiful words, Mushy, you make me feel all ooey gooey inside. I love you. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 02:19 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy Mmmmmmm If I were wine would you imbibe me? Feel me flowing through you wildly free Pouring through your body endlessly As your heart pumped me constantly Feel me fizzing in you delightfully Igniting your blood incandescently If I were wine would you take all of me? Say yes and I’ll be loving you devotedly I love playing like this, this is what writing should be real fun ...... Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awright! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Darling, Marsha, you write: If I were wine would you imbibe me? Feel me flowing through you wildly free Pouring through your body endlessly As your heart pumped me constantly Feel me fizzing in you delightfully Igniting your blood incandescently If I were wine would you take all of me? Say yes and I’ll be loving you devotedly. I write: Yes, darling, this Valentine's day, If you were wine I'd remove your cork, free And slowly, slowly, let your vapor arouse me As you vaporize and rise into my nose Tickling my nostrils with your warm red glows. I'd pour you slowly into my finest glass Hold you to the light, to see you naked, as I watch your warm red body glow, divine. And with my heated tongue, I'd taste your shine. Permit my lips to savor you drop by drop Imbibing your body and soul, and never stop. I'd drink you in completely as you intoxicate my heart Fuse you into my blood and let you pump all through my parts. My Wine! My Valentine! I love you, Marsha, ((Marsha)) -newell Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida February 13, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 06:19 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Interloper. Would you like to join in? ((Interloper)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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