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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-11 12:28 PM


“BLUES TONIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Rhythm inside, easy,
feeling it I am…
Playing it one time,
just want to jam…

Strumming, taste it,
inside your soul…
You must know,
it does console…

Don’t shake, sway,
hips to move slowly…
Just once for me,
sexy, sensually…

You’re looking good,
in candlelight…
When you dance,
my blues tonight…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-11 12:54 PM


oh yes! Keep the music going!
Nice write BC

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-02-11 01:20 PM


Ah..this suits my mood today...would love to hear some good blues tonight.
Tiersdin
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3 posted 2002-02-11 01:23 PM


I could almost feel the music...

enjoyed this!

~Tier

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2002-02-11 01:23 PM


Dear Bill,
Oh yeah. I like that feel, the slow bluesy tune fills my head. Nice.

Nan

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5 posted 2002-02-11 01:29 PM


Wait, I think I hear it. Yes, wonderful music Bill, thanks.  LOL nice poem and I love guitar music. and blues..floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-02-11 01:30 PM


Bill....really a great tune you played for us last night!  And, I could listen to it all day!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2002-02-11 05:06 PM


*sigh* swaying to the soft music of your words....Beautiful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-02-11 05:25 PM






(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever strum her heart with your smooth jazz and comforting blues, this is soooooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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9 posted 2002-02-11 05:30 PM


mmmmmmmm, bluesy.  I like it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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