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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-10 04:23 PM

A breeze over still water rippling
A touch over smooth skin enticing
Embrace of arms comforting
Kisses, given so teasing

A shaft of light showing
A glimmer in eyes glowing
Two hearts ever knowing
As passion’s love is flowing

A mountain of fond memories
A fount of chosen liberties
A stand of faithful trees
Love’s sensuous swarm of bees

Taste of lips so passion filled
Lost in moments as two thrilled
Left the feeling warm, not chilled
Loving, lasting, as both willed

Left to share beneath moonlight
Sighs that echo in the night
Lost in visions of dream sight
Loving desire of eternal delight

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-10-2002 05:36 PM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2002-02-10 05:31 PM

Beautiful..

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-02-10 05:51 PM

A beautiful, romantic poem, Barry...
Its as beautiful as a delicate flower.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-10 05:54 PM

Oooooh I love it!! It makes me think of how much I want to taste my dream girl's sugary lips! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Barry, Thank You for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-02-10 06:36 PM

*sigh*

more, please...

*smiles*

~Tier

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-10 06:39 PM

Magnus, your rhythm and flow in this piece is so so good. One of your best. love it.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-02-10 11:24 PM

S I G H~

I love this.....

very nice Barry~

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-10 11:50 PM

*sigh* oh my...oh my...this poem is so filled with sensual passion...oh gosh...makes me want to be kissed...**big hugs**

Did I say I love it? I LOVE IT...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-02-11 10:14 AM

I have this wonderful thought. Print out all your poems to her, on beautiful red paper, bound up with a ribbon, for Valentines day.
(I know that would be an outstanding gift)
Sandra

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2002-02-11 04:08 PM

Hello Barry

This was stunning with such wonderful images.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2002-02-11 04:20 PM

Barry
This is a beautiful romantic write! It just flows from your heart and I think you should do what Sandra suggests....what an awesome Valentine!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2002-02-11 04:22 PM

Eternal delight is much better than afternoon delight

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

12 posted 2002-02-11 04:44 PM

awesome poem...makes me think of Jude...ah look what you've made me do! haha gtg byes!
Tifferz

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