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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
For one moment you were mine, tender lover My Angel, who's wings swaddled me in loving protecton For one moment, I knew your kiss so like the sweetest wine made from love's perfect fruit You touched me 'til our souls smiled bathed in the afterglow of the beauty of what could have been... ~Tier 6/00 |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Had to wipe a tear for the sweetness of this. Some people touch us like this and someimes it is their memory that soothes us in the tough times. Absolutely wonderful tribute!! Kat  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh my gosh...did my heart ever feel this one....I wanted to reach out and say..."oh please don't let this end" sigh a moment that became eternity in your heart...My heart felt this poem...Thank you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You touched me 'til our souls smiled bathed in the afterglow of the beauty of what could have been... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tier~This is sooo beautiful! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
why not what it should be??? sorry. . . it's just that too many people lament what could have been. . . well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now you have found true love and happiness that glows in your heart forever and fills you with an afterglow of happiness! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tiersdin, "My Angel, This is just beautiful. I love those lines SO much. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-10-2002 08:56 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Tier...this is such a beautiful poem, but so tinged with sadness. I don't know whether it was about a lover or a child, but either way, it was just as sad...and just as beautiful.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tiersdin - a lovely write for sure... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You've captured the bittersweetness of the moment~ This made my heart weigh heavy~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ohhh how bittersweet! (hugs) I really liked this |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You touched me 'til our souls smiled bathed in the afterglow of the beauty of what could have been... I've known this love...justice written here, Tier. |
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