Open Poetry #18 |
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Your Touch...a sonnett for David's Birthday |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan ![]() |
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Wrapping your sweetness around me your warm lips kiss me awake I feel your love embrace my soul my flame is yours to take you captured my heart on the day we met your love reached out to mine from the moment we first glimpsed each other we felt our passion shine as our fingertips laced together so deep, this unexpected feeling the tendrils of our fire blazed two hearts, one love, our senses reeling as I feel the warmth of your grey green gaze I'll cherish your touch for the rest of our days |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely sonnet for your David, Lyra. And wish him a Happy Birthday from Nancy at Passions too! ![]() ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sweet and tender romance...the perfect gift for your dear David...Beautiful. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Wish him Happy Birthday from us too!! It's a wonderful poem!! ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Nancy, Karen and Amusemi......thanks so much for your replies. I will certainly convey your birthday wishes to David. David is a vegetarian, and he also doesn't eat any dairy...so I can't just make him a normal birthday cake. I have to be a bit inventive. Do you think he will like some talking brocoli? ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Madame Chipmunk, This is so pretty ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! (big huggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautiful snnet for David, I just know he is going to love it, just as he will love you forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) WE all love you so much, sweet friend, this is the perfect Valentines gift! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There's a whole lot of loving going on here. Your words are a treasure chest full of gems. I so enjoy the sparkle in your poetry Lyra. Lucky guy your David is. ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lyra, tis perfection...me thinks he will realllllly like this one.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Lyra, what a lucky guy he is. this is so so lovely. ![]() Floria |
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