My Valentine Gift to You...My Wife

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-10 03:12 PM

I let you into my heart,I held it.
True warmth, feelings flowed through.
I let you into my life, treasured it.
Can you tell me I am,that I'll do?

I watched the sun set around your face.
Silhouette of beauty ingrained in me.
I saw that smile,the beauty and grace.
I felt it too,felt it come so tenderly.

I give you my life,you have it daily.
I give you my comfort,the warm fire.
I take from you only...love ever freely.
I return to you love, passion and desire.

I love you,saying I did not is a lie.
I love you,eternally I whisper to you.
I cannot stop,stop loving,for I cry.
Simply dear,I say, I echo words so true.

Place me in your heart,your soul, chest.
Lock my memory tightly away,let stay.
Leave me only at time we both must rest.
For dearest,I want it simply this way.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-10 03:16 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, you are such a beautiful and sensitive man and I just know that she will always love you so much and forever hold your love close to her heart forever! (big hugggssssss) This is the perfect Valentines gift for your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-02-10 03:32 PM

Magnus,
is there a little thread of sadness running through this? It seems so from the pensive write.
Anyway good stuff.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-02-10 03:40 PM

Noah...thanx my friend...always so kind..

Keth...this has been an emotionally draining
week for me...Lots happening...guess it bled
over into my poem... Thanx for your kindness

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-02-10 03:44 PM

Touching...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-10 04:00 PM

She's one lucky lady to have a husband pen something this beautiful for her....and, you in turn are one lucky man to have her as your wife, Barry.
This is indeed a wonderful Valentine for your wife!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-02-10 06:55 PM

W0NDERFUL MAGNUS, well, I keep telling you the last one is your best and then you write a better one yet. oh my, guess they are all great.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-10 11:54 PM

*sigh* I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!Lou will be so touched she will cry...this is the perfect valentine gift and I want to know her reaction to it...BRAVO!!! I am so glad for Lou that you are such a romantic husband...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-02-10 11:57 PM

awwwwww your love poems are so breath-taking!
I hope to someday marry a man with your qualities becase you are truly a wonderful man.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-11 12:09 PM

Very lovely indeed Barry~ so sweet the gift of written words....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2002-02-11 12:38 PM

You have written the love that I want for all time. Think we're both going to have a great Valentine's day this year!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-02-11 01:21 AM

Barry,
Very lovely poem for a lovely lady I am sure! Happy V'day.

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