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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-02-10 07:36 PM

In this hollow place
kept warm with hope
I await your return

A dream kept alive
in the cold face
of reality

To know finally
your touch,
your kiss,
your warmth,
empowers me...

Have I loved
in vain?

Come home to my heart
I beg you,
return to me soon...

-R.T.
2/00

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-02-10 07:37 PM

a prayer that I hope is answered soon my friend. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-10 07:38 PM

Oh Tier~This piece just aches with...yearning.
Very very well done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-10 07:38 PM

You did this...

Kept
It
Short,
Sweet...

good method!

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

4 posted 2002-02-10 07:40 PM

Beautifully done!!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2002-02-10 07:53 PM

Thank you, Sven,Nancy, Sunshine, & Amusemi... I appreciate your comments!

*huggies*

~Tier

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-02-10 08:04 PM

Oh yes, I so relate to this, as I do all your poems. Beautifully done.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-10 08:24 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such yearning fills your lovely words! (big huggssssss) I pray that love will come to you soon and I know with all my heart it will stay forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

8 posted 2002-02-10 08:30 PM

A very heartfelt request:prayer...nicely written!

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