Sap from the Sappy Tree (don't read if you're not into cliche sickening love poetry)

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-02-08 11:55 PM

When the music doesn't calm
and the tears break the flood barriers
I seek my comfort in the arms of your voice.
Ilove you so grandly that all my words
will never do.
I love you so passionately that I'll never be able to do without you.
Iam in no position to doubt what my heart wants
because there is no tame distraction
that will calm my spirit from needing you so much.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Do you like me?
I would have written my own answers to that
if I had known you when growing was our full time occupation
instead of our jobs.
Could there have been a cirle
passionately so
yes or no
or marry me now
Oh could there have been that one and only place
for my heart to circle so largely
that you could feel it before i passed back the note?
And I'm rambling because you do that to me
and this is what my writing has become
since I have known the in and out of our love.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wonderfully
Romantically
Beautifully
Wonderously
Thrillingly
Enthusiastically
I am yours.
And I have no choice
since my heart had its say over my mind.
This is bad poetry
but I love you for it
because without you I wouldn't be able to say these things.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-09 12:09 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I don't think this is bad at all, your love poetry always makes me smile and it is always such a delight to read! (kiss on cheek) The best way to describe love is always sincerely, and you always do that so well, we're all sooooo proud of you and love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-02-09 12:10 PM

this isn't bad poetry! It's so heartfelt and original....I love this!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-02-09 12:55 PM

This is truly poetry from your heart!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-02-09 10:00 AM

Bad Poetry??? Oh my Temptress, then mine is rubbish. LOL, this is so sweet, romantic and full of wonderful feelings.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-02-09 10:06 AM

Temptress,
That's what it's all about. Enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-02-09 01:37 PM

I can sure connect with those last three lines...sometimes my mind says to me "what the heck are you writing"...but my heart is encouraging me to let it flow...James

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-09 01:49 PM

*giggling* of course you know that I love it...not sickening in the least but it did make me sigh...you have said it with class and beauty from a heart the is filled with love...BRAVO!!! **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-09 02:13 PM

Wonderful Jenn, as though you are thinking aloud. I love it! And, it is what poetry is all about.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-02-09 02:24 PM

Jen, this is GOOD stuff!! It isnt cliche at all, it is so unique

(hugs)

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-02-10 08:06 PM

everyone knows that I just hate love poetry. . . (especially the cliche and sickening kind!!!)

this is wonderful. . . it's from the heart and from the soul. . . and that's where all good poetry has it's start. . .

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