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paladin
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0 posted 2002-02-10 11:49 AM


Red

The color of flame
Hot hungry toungues lapping
Consumming the world


Orange

Strange word can not rhyme
Golden globes in deep green leaves
Ripe for the picking


Yellow

Sun in it's glory
Filling the sky up above
Smiles on the earth


Green

Carpets the meadow
Verdant color of emerald
Run in it bare foot


Blue

The stark sky against
The deep ocean's rolling waves
Restless for all time


Indigo

Night time still and dark
Hidden from our seeking eyes
What mysterys lurk


Violet

Black light on posters
Images viberate with life
Titilates our minds

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1 posted 2002-02-10 11:54 AM




YAY!!! (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love rainbows, your gorgeous words reflect all the colors of life soooooo beautifully and creatively! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, you are a spectrum of wonder! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-10 11:56 AM


Robert,
Wow.I love rainbows and I love the way you've turned the colrs into imagery.Greatly done.
Peaches

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3 posted 2002-02-10 11:58 AM


Very well done!!  I can almost taste them!  


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4 posted 2002-02-10 12:14 PM


Hey Bob!  Good to see you posting here again!
I love this, and to me it is one of your better pieces.  Great idea for the use of colors, and wonderful imagery.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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