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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2002-02-10 02:40 AM


A transformation
From love...to what is now not
I cried my last tear.

© Copyright 2002 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-10 03:13 AM


I'm so sorry...for your loss.  I still feel the wounds, myself.  And pray they never return.
bbent
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2 posted 2002-02-10 03:35 AM


I like this,short and to the point.
I don't see it as all painful.
Isn't metamorphosis a changing or rebirth,
not nessasarily an ending,but a new begining.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-02-10 04:32 AM


Lots of meaning within these words...James
peaches73533
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4 posted 2002-02-10 04:38 AM


Lots of powerful meaning in these few short words.I hear you loud and clear.
Peaches

ethome
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5 posted 2002-02-10 08:08 AM


There's a tear or two left for deep sweet thinkers.

That's quite the title and content. Marvelous conception!

Marsha
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6 posted 2002-02-10 11:54 AM


Paula darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly outstanding writing. I adore this I really do, I shan’t make the mistake of thinking it’s an expression of inner turmoil I know you are happy. And no one deserves it more darling heart. Wonderful

Truly your writing is wonderful you write so well, scratch that you write brilliantly. Your clarity of expressing emotion is unique, well done darling heart truly excellent writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


amusemi
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A State of Disarray
7 posted 2002-02-10 11:56 AM


It's just a place to start...

Kat

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8 posted 2002-02-10 12:05 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Paula, my heart cries out to your loss, I know juyst how you feel and I pray with all my heart that you will again break out of this cocoon of emptiness and embracfe love again eternally as a happy butterfly you are! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-02-10 12:08 PM


Paula,
What comes around goes around. enjoyed

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-02-11 01:05 PM


metamorphosis
not an easy transition
where love is involved

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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