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Tim
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0 posted 2002-02-09 10:32 PM


I think that I shall never see,
A person lovely as is me,
A me whose mighty biceps bulge,
And to the world my strength divulge.
A me that looks at me all day,
At no one else, what can I say.
Adonis pales to my physique,
Atlas, next to me is weak,
Muscles are made by sweat you see,
But only steroids, make a me.


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cwebb
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1 posted 2002-02-09 10:38 PM


Ha!  This is great - I just sat here laughing - thinking of all the earnest bodybuilders at my gym... bulked out so much that in street clothes, they look fat!  

good job with this - it's well-done AND fun to read!

Carol

Martie
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2 posted 2002-02-10 09:55 AM


Tim--you gave me a


peaches73533
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3 posted 2002-02-10 09:59 AM


Thanks for the smile I needed it.
Peaches

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4 posted 2002-02-10 11:12 AM


hahahahaha!

sky

Nan
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5 posted 2002-02-11 01:10 PM


I'm sitting here smirking - picturing all those guys at the fitness center - flexing their muscles ... bigger than the guy beside them - ...
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