Open Poetry #18 |
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Breathing Love |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Your face..... a flame consuming my inhibitions.Your arms a vise squeezing me tightly, firmly in their grip.And, you are the Sun...rays permeating the heat of my soul, warming the slow burn of my ardor.My soul languishes in time.Awaiting the touch of your searching kiss, the feel of your smooth skin merging with my own saffron-mellow flesh.My soul pants after you breathless with the taste of the air that you breathed before. Your scent still hanging in the air...suspended in instant wonder, slow dancing with joyous tears at your nearness, your incomparable grace.And, you are the breath of me, the hollowed-out soul that asks to be filled with the very heart, the very thought of me. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ivy Rose this is so tender and so romantic , what a lovely write. floria |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ivy Rose This was simply stunning and very much enjoyed. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
your thoughts are so in tune with my own this evening. I enjoyed this. My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
"slow dancing with joyous tears at your nearness" Tight words.....I liked this poem alot =) Joe |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are soooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you breathe the essence of love in all your gorgeous words! (smiles) May the beauty of love forever strum the lyre of the spirit within! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!This one breathes love and passion with every word...Absolutely magnificent. I love it, Ivy...your weaving is sizzling tonight. **hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy...this little baby is sizzling with passion and the yearning of another... Whewwww.. |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Love does wonders.....But most can not sum it up in sweet,passionate words, you did an excellant job....Enjoyed! ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the romance and the passion in this one, Ivy..... a perfect love poem! ![]() copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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