Open Poetry #18 |
Lovingly Haunting - Elizabeth Santos |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovingly Haunting Inspired by E. Santos It is a picture I have of you in my mind Lovingly haunting It will surely find Me thinking of you At your desk or such Penning enchanted words That only you might touch. A picture brought of you Plying romance at its best Pouring forth your heart Giving us no less. Lovingly haunting As your words may be For we all look forward To your penned-sweet poetry. I see you here, In my mind's eye And enjoined to that A picture of Sy Who reads your words And captures your feel In paint on canvas So it becomes real I see your mind In glory bent In Sudhir's poems Of vacations spent, In Sven's remarks Of his Knighthood dreams In Balladeer's quest To sketch his dreams, In Claire's portraits In Christopher's philosophies, Marge's winged spirit In our Moth, Janet Marie, Each stroke of your pen Touches Helmut and Mark And Prometheus comes To see your new spark Of light as it shines For each Parker and Kit And Justbleu is here To take part in it As you allow SEA to be Logan's wind of breeze On Interloper's haikus With such intensive ease I see you in Nan Two souls of a kind You've even brought Mysteria to Tears, in your sweet entwine You keep Sailors wondering Why they sail the oceans Keeping Marsha mushy With your pennings of devotion For you are lovingly haunting As only you can be And Ms. Santos, Elizabeth, I curtsey to the art of thee. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 July 2000 revised 4 January 2001 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And I bow to your superb poetic skills of wonderous word-weaving BRAVA! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul, this is without doubt one of your utter best. How amazingly beautiful is this darling girl. And why is this so low on the page? With just one reply. Utterly wonderful writing as always. YOU really do get better and better Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh oh - Lil Liz is gonna be sniffling over tjhis one. Nicely penned, ya lil sniffle-bringer! |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
WOWza...yep..nuff said |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - touching writing to a friend and friends. Nicely done... BC |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hee hee hee, you are gooooooood this is so great!! (thanks for throwing me in there) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Tis a grand portrait of Elizabeth you've painted~ She is all that ... and more~ *Hugs* to you sweet poetess~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She has inspired many of us with her grace and spirit as both woman and poetess... she has made many of us strive to be better poets ... we grow in the light of her example. Thank you for including me in such esteemed company dear poetess Sun. "Though my soul may sit in darkness, It will arise in perfect light. For I have loved the stars much too fondly ... To be fearful of the night." [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-04-2002 02:30 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is a lovely tribute to one of the best poets PIP... or the world *S*... has to offer. *S* Excellent portrait, Sunshine! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunshine, all I can do is smile........and say Thank you. You have captured our Liz just wonderfuly. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Only a few can know how much this poem means to me today, and so I will tell the rest who don't know. This has breathed new life into my day, has surrounded me with friendship more so than a live hand reaching out to touch me, it is a song to my spirit, and today, especially it has uplifted my heart, Thank you Karilea for all you have done. Your poem is so beautiful, and you have meantioned names that mean so much to me, and there are many others also. I am very warme by your gesture THank you all for your kind replies. Liz |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea...a most beautiful poem, and for a very poetic lady....This is simply awesome. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
All I can add to this is my life is so much better for loving both of you as friends. Elizabeth, I have told you so many times how I admire your poetry, but as a person your spirit, heart, and frienship is a treasure to me. Breathe my friend, breathe for you are loved! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
An incredibly wonderful weave Karilea! This flowed beautifully throughout, and thank you Liz for inspiring this delightful piece for Sunshine ... much enjoyed! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssssss) You and Elizabeth are such beautiful wonderful friends and poetesses and always charm us with such lovely visions! (kiss on cheek) We all love you both, sweet friend, she is worthy of this beautiful declaration! We all love you so much, sweet Sunshine! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a beautiful tribute to Elizabeth, I also curtsey to her. floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely tribute, Karilea... I am sure Elizabeth will be more than flattered. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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