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A Time for Silhouettes
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A Time for Silhouettes |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123
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The world is mine now and yet I am quiet, groping, then guided anxiously like a plant to light beyond a dark immediate interlude. The memory of essence past dulls, coagulates, engulfs an urgent void. The senses steeled, catapult, rebound, intensely echo, writhe, melt, absorb a creamy deja-vu. As the Zen poem questions "How does one place a noise?" The world is mine now and quiet I'll remain. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thought provoking peace  Certainly worth rereading and pondering. Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
a poem that will make a reader think... if that was what you were shooting for... then you got it... 1, GhostWriter_6 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"a creamy deja-vu."Oh how nice this is.. very very nice. floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Nicely done, Craig... A very quiet poem, but it left me with a great big impression!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this four times, thus, I am four-times pleased... |
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