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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
{This is repost from open poetry 15} A Song for Justin D. He said he didn't come to offer peace, only raw truth & when he spoke, I cried for his voice was like crashing thunder & the screeching of metal against metal his words seemed to peel layers from my heart & tho his eyes were gentle, he remained hard, unmoving he was the challenger daring heros to pick up their swords the lover & the hater of things men cannot fathom He whispers wrath ablaze in hazel depths inspiring fear with beauty He said that he didn't come to offer peace just his version of the truth to any who could stand it... ~Tier 9/01 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
He said that he didn't come to offer peace just his version of the truth to any who could stand it... We all have our versions of the truth. This was an outstanding poem, thank you for this. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...this poem is incredibly powerful...I love it...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, your words chime with justice and truth, I always love how you express yourself! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for aharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very powerful piece here! I like the way you've expressed it |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Rocks me off my moorings and sets me adrift in the sea of your storming verse. DAAAAAAMN! Mikey |
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