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Open Poetry #18

Lazy Afterthought

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-01-04 03:51 PM

the falling embers
of a yesterday gone
flatter you into thinking
its all over
hitting your eyes
and leaving you to dust
the past is realised
but much to late

helping your self
when love runs away
turn your eyes
to the new sun
lifting you again
above the rain
the dreams start anew
and then are over

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-04 04:34 PM

This is beautiful !

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

2 posted 2002-01-04 04:41 PM

Even when there is an eclipse,
we still know the sun reigns
behind the darkness...

I enjoyed this. Thank you.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2002-01-04 07:21 PM

Very true words you have written here. Done in your typical flawless style.

Love,
Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

4 posted 2002-01-08 10:34 AM

I envy your talent to express the often "un expressable"......
As Always
Jenn E

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