Open Poetry #18 |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
Said and Done Would you be, here with me, If I had, The world in my hands, And I know now, And I know now, You're all the same to me, How could you be so mean, I thought I had you here, With me, Never wanna fall in love again, Why did you go, And leave me alone, I thought you knew, That you were my own, And I know now, And I know now, You broke me apart inside, Made me believe you cared, Ithought I knew you, Inside, But I never knew you at all, And I crawl, Down a broken path, And I fall, Down a neverending hole, I try and forget, What we were, Maybe I am, Better alone, But I miss you, Miss you so much... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
"I try and forget, What we were, Maybe I am, Better alone, But I miss you, Miss you so much..." Bittersweet, those memories.. you captured the emotions well... I too remember feeling like this.. ::sigh:: Pepper |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
painful for sure o yuh work it out with verse |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes me feel so terrible! I can relate so well...it will pass, it will pass...trust me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ocelot, this feels like a song. I like it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Ocelot, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and prays that now your heart is happy with love and you don't feel this loneliness in these words! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, sad but very beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ocelot, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem breaks my heart. I know this feeling so very well. I hope that the pain you are now feeling does not last too long and that you have love filling your heart to heal it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to paassions nice write |
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