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Passion's Imagination (senryu string by Interloper and Startime)
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Passion's Imagination (senryu string by Interloper and Startime) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Passion’s Imagination (senryu string by Interloper and Startime) you stand before me a lovely picture in pose our love fills my heart I stand before you with butterflies of desire wanting to be kissed I fly to your side Embracing my one true love Hungry lips meeting thirst that keeps growing drinking deeply passion’s wine flames become a fire gown slowly falling becomes a puddle of silk surrounding your feet silhouettes blending now bathed within the moonlight moans break the silence the scene fades to red passion’s imagination and yours must suffice Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO and STANDING OVATIONS!  This is superb, from two of the absolute best LOVE poets. I'm keeping all of these, ya know. (PS, you better copyright them, today!) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...Interloper...this is nice...a neat twist to poetry... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ok...letting my imagination finish this. Applause to you both!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Hungry lips meeting"...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, is there something I should know about??? You two steamed up my computer. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Midnitesun...gosh how I love that name...thank you so much...these were such fun to do and I discovered just how hard too...I really have a lot of respect for how well Interloper does them...**big hugs** Barry...*giggling* yes...I love the ending he came up with...brought the whole thing together perfectly..**big hugs** Duncan....*giggling with wickedness* sometimes the imagination can fill things in much better than words can. **big hugs** thank you... James...don't you just love it when you are starving for a kiss from your lover and they give you one that curls your toes? **big hugs**  Sandra...*giggling* nothing going on but it sure was fun to try and fit these together...hey...get a hold of the doc and see what you two can come up with...I bet my comp would burst into flames...  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Karen and Interloper - a gently woven string here...thank you for sharing.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love them, sweet friends, you two weave such gorgeous passion together in these words, I love it!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you both so so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Interloper and Karen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderfully beautiful. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen and Interloper! My my...someone turned up the heat at Passions! Well done you two and much enjoyed. ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
ahem... it suddenly got very hot in here.. uhhhh... oh yes - the poem..!! WOW! Exceptional work!! I LOVE this!  ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime - great writing is this duet. You work well together... BC |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
two of my favorite people writing gorgeous poetry together love it!! |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
through words such as these a wired man became...... silk thread...............mark |
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