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A dog and a cat (Tanka)
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A dog and a cat (Tanka) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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A dog and a cat (Tanka) Ralph saw her one day purring along as he played her back hair stood up as she encountered the pup froze with her claws on his nose. Copyright: Newell Elsworh Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs Florida July 12, 2001 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh gosh I have seen just such a scene as this and I still can't help but laugh...poor pup...*giggling* Oh my this poem is delightful. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa so much for puppy love..cute one newell ~Vic |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Karen. I try to write about everything in life. Glad you liked it.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Vic. Glad you enjoyed. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHA my son in law is Ralph, I must show this to him. good write, floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thanks, floria. Glad you liked it. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Oh excellent! An entire scene in so few words, and it provokes great images! I like a lot!! ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, icequeen. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ouch for poor puppy! LOL, I've seen this scene. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ouch is right! LOL... Thanks, Midnitesun, for reading. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Double that ouch, but I still won't declaw my feline friends nice write silver |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I understand, ecrivan. God gave them claws to protect themselves and be cats! Doggies just need to learn that. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful I could easily see the picture of the cat and the puppy. You paint word pictures delightfully and this is wonderfully painted in clear and vibrant life You’ve always been an excellent writer, lately you’re even better. Absolutely perfect writing darling boy I love it, but I guess you know that already don’t you? Good because I do. Fabulous writing, absolutely fabulous   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy :kissTo give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you darling Slushy, your words are like honey to me. I adore them. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-08-2002 08:11 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, poor puppy, why can't we all just get along? (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for you kind thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Silver Streak - this is great. What dog doesn't end up with the cat at the end of his nose... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very funny, Bill. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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