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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-02-08 10:48 AM



A sunset rose blooms upon the horizon
slowly fading like crystal dew of dawn
melting into a jupiter blue sea
upon waves of a salty bouquet

a eulogy of yesterday
deeply in the memoirs of mocha sands
bidding fondly a sweet adieu

along emerald seaweed shores
a garden of moonlight
blossoming like a geranium

each petal of wine is a star, reborn
drifting within the chalice of heaven
another prayer that has come true
christening another tomorrow for you



You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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1 posted 2002-02-08 10:55 AM


*sigh* this poem is absolutely stunning....I love the whole feel of it...it is so filled with tenderness...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-02-08 10:56 AM


Very nice, Vic. Always beautiful.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-02-08 11:51 AM


A toast to another lovely poem, Victoria

Long may your imagery rule at Passions

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-02-08 11:51 AM


~V~

So beautiful....such a magic about this...    

Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart



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5 posted 2002-02-08 11:59 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo magical, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so enchanting and lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may each brand new day radiate with love and joy for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-08 12:18 PM



"Each petal of wine is a star, reborn
drifting within the chalice of heaven"

What great imagery!  I love your style!
Your poems always inspire my visions in poetry

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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7 posted 2002-02-08 12:23 PM


*sigh* as always excellent done. Love the imagery.....love it!

Charisma

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8 posted 2002-02-08 12:41 PM


**Folks i will be away next week..so see you when i get back hugss**

karen..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed

sandra...thank you hon

madame..love the graphic hugs

lauren..it took a while before i was satified with it..hugs

noah..thank you sweet noah hugss

melissa..thank you..happy you are inspired

charisma..thank you very much kind lady

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