Open Poetry #18 |
Petals of Wine |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
A sunset rose blooms upon the horizon slowly fading like crystal dew of dawn melting into a jupiter blue sea upon waves of a salty bouquet a eulogy of yesterday deeply in the memoirs of mocha sands bidding fondly a sweet adieu along emerald seaweed shores a garden of moonlight blossoming like a geranium each petal of wine is a star, reborn drifting within the chalice of heaven another prayer that has come true christening another tomorrow for you You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-08-2002 10:49 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem is absolutely stunning....I love the whole feel of it...it is so filled with tenderness...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, Vic. Always beautiful. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A toast to another lovely poem, Victoria Long may your imagery rule at Passions copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ So beautiful....such a magic about this... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-08-2002 11:54 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo magical, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so enchanting and lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may each brand new day radiate with love and joy for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Each petal of wine is a star, reborn drifting within the chalice of heaven" What great imagery! I love your style! Your poems always inspire my visions in poetry Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* as always excellent done. Love the imagery.....love it! Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
**Folks i will be away next week..so see you when i get back hugss** karen..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed sandra...thank you hon madame..love the graphic hugs lauren..it took a while before i was satified with it..hugs noah..thank you sweet noah hugss melissa..thank you..happy you are inspired charisma..thank you very much kind lady |
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