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Betrayed
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Betrayed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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This kind of spontaneously wrote itself after a difficult dream.. He snuck behind me in the dark while my back was turned in loving He pulled his sword, he stabbed me deep and I never saw it coming. I looked at him dazed and confused Why did he do such thing to me He claims he had no choice at all together-we weren't meant to be. Twas just false love and pseudo need that made him call me to his side Just a mistake, surely I saw it was a waste of time to cry. Well with his swords enlightenment I surely grew to understand that loving him with all my soul was not enough to please this man. Still there are days I hear his voice as if a phantom on the wind it calls ever so quietly and begs me to come home again. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (02-07-2002 07:42 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, I'm so sorry you had such a sad dream last night, my heart goe sout to you and I pray with all my heart that you will find a true love worthy of you soon who will never betray you and always be faithful to your heart! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts and prayers are always with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton P.S: I'll have my stanzas for our duet mailed tonight! YAY!!! (smiles) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't you listen! Well done for a spur of the moment thing, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Drink sweet and honeyed tea before sleeping again, and put this nightmare to rest... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Expressed with deep emotions. Take it easy. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Gosh, Sandra, this is a horrible dream! Sometimes I write about them the minute I wake up.  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Obviously this knight wasn't the one three doors down. I try to keep a happy thought before drifting away though sometimes difficult ... I do wish you that happy thought. Always - Craig |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Tough write...but very deep. It's good to set it free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It doesn't always work even when we want it to with all of our heart...and yes it does feel like a betrayal...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, So I was wrong...good things can come from a nightmare! Wow.  |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Amazing, Sandra.. this is so well-written.. but then, that doesn't amaze me coming from u.. it's just the total write that's amazing (sometimes these dreams are real, aren't they?)  Wishing you happier dreams from now on Pepper |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yikes, Sandra! That is definitely not the man you want in your dreams. Write him right out of your mind. I will send peaceful thoughts on a moonbeam to you tonight. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sandra Very deep write and it certainly is horrible when you are betrayed, either in your dreams or not. Nicely done! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
where in the world do dreams come from..i bet you were glad when you woke up ha..try not to eat pizza anymore before you go to sleep ..  ~Vic |
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