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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-02-07 05:10 PM

"Kiss the salt of tears away
but forever here do stay
for all intent is mine to give
without you, I could not live"

And so she spoke to her true love
then picked a star from high above,
put it in his eye to gleam
and upon that star, she wished a dream

"O pure star of fair intent
leave me my love, for heaven sent
him to me, for all of my adore,
and I would love him, forever, and more"

She then tucked a spring of thyme
and then a word or two of rhyme
she sang to him, in whispered tear
for soon dawn's light would appear

"In unconditional love I give
all that I would have you live
but just a dream you are, I know
and still I would live in your glow"

Then an ember from the fire she sought
and to his imagined heart she brought
the flame of keep, of forevermore,
and held it to her dream's inner core

She took forget-me-not's blue flower
and lined them all within her bower
then bedded frame with pine-boughs green
to hold forever this tender dream

She lay within this haven, then
in hopes of true love's forever-when
for unconditional love to her should come
to hear her heart's unconditional strum

Then lo, a footstep came at night
with stars to give their guiding light
and love, He came, to fill her dreams
beneath dark skies of moon's gold beams

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-07 05:28 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, the sweet perfume of unconditional love fills all your gorgeous words always, such gorgeous rhyme sings from your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may that star always twinkle with pure love in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-02-07 05:30 PM

WOW! This is absolutely stunning. So wishing on a star works sometimes..good to know.
Sandra

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-02-07 06:00 PM

gliding on moonbeams
I fly to your side dear one
anticipating
ready to fulfill your wish
while wishing my own wishes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-02-07 06:03 PM

Now, this could melt even the hardest of hearts. The only way that love should be.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

5 posted 2002-02-07 07:36 PM

Very romantic and tender, could feel the heartbeat in this one. Thank you for sharing it.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-02-07 07:55 PM

Very romantic and a very good flow to this, I enjoyed reading it Soleil.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-02-07 08:01 PM

Soleil Noir - very heartfelt writing, excellent....

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-02-07 10:02 PM

Beautifully penned words of romance and love.
Wishing upon stars always helps...certainly
can not go wrong by doing that.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-02-07 10:35 PM

Oh this is so beautiful!!
Enjoyed the read thoroughly.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2002-02-07 11:53 PM

Magical and so incredibly romantic, the imagery is delightful!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-02-08 12:27 PM

Enjoyed this very much...James

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2002-02-08 12:57 PM

Okay I am running outside to collect all the ingredients and will let you know if this works! Oh this was simply delightful, and such a romantic ambience to it.

loved it!

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

13 posted 2002-02-08 08:17 AM

I love a happy ending, Soleil... Unconditionally...

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