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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-07 01:06 PM

Invade My Thoughts

You invade my thoughts in daylight
tickling at my heart
You make my eyes shine with delight
making all I see an art

You invade my thoughts in strange ways
bringing to life daydreams
I wait for ending of the days
to take a trip on moonbeams

You invade my thoughts at twilight
making me want my bed
My arms are open to invite
your love with words unsaid

You invade my thoughts at midnight
setting flames of desire
Fill me with visions that excite
and give what I require

Phantom lover come hear my plead,
invade my thoughts again
Your passion in my thoughts, I need,
to banish lonely pain

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-02-07 01:18 PM

Lucky is the man that invades your thoughts
To be given the attention from such a wonderful poetess.
I hope he can share what your words brought
And find in them your spiritual sweetness

Gloom

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2002-02-07 01:19 PM

Karen,beautiful poem filled with emotions.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2002-02-07 01:55 PM

Very much enjoyed.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-02-07 02:17 PM

You do passion...so well!!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-02-07 02:45 PM

love the romance in this one, Karen

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-02-07 04:23 PM

This really is how it is, Karen I know. You write this so well.
Sandra

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-02-07 04:47 PM

O! Karen! how fortunate he is! This Phantom Lover. To be longed for and loved by such a beautiful sweet precious jewel, as you.

((Karen))

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-02-07 05:06 PM

Hope this phantom lover gets real, real soon

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-07 05:48 PM

I love this Karen, so soft and tender....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2002-02-07 05:51 PM

Thoroughly enjoyed.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-02-07 06:22 PM

Karen - Your pen full of romance, your words full with grace. Love is in the write..

BC

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

12 posted 2002-02-07 06:54 PM

Oh I love the repetition, You invade my thoughts, very nicely done Karen.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-02-07 09:58 PM

Phantom comes and then goes
away into the starry night.
Only Karen, Phantom knows
a star is shining bright.

I do love your Phantom Lover poems...
Maybe I need to walk the halls of PiP
again....

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

14 posted 2002-02-07 10:08 PM

Phantom Lover

Whispered words of rapture
And promises of lust
My heart, she does capture
And need becomes a must

My arms long to hold
My lips forever thirst
My limbs seeks to mould
To her body till I burst

With much unbridled passion
And charms of which I dream
She loves me in such a fashion
That her actions make me scream

Sorry Karen..couldn't help myself (wicked grin) He hears dear friend and he will be yours one day!!!Beautiful poem!!!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-02-07 11:05 PM

Be careful of what you wish for, Karen.
Do you really want a phantom or would you rather have a real man? LOL

Beautifully written and very romantic.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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