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Once Upon A Time... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Finally, alone with you. We wasted too much time again. Taunting tantalizing tease... we tasted too much wine of "friend". My hands still smell of your cologne. I lick my lips and taste your smile. I close my eyes to keep you close-- I hear your voice across the miles. No. I will not sleep tonight. (I love you.) I am terrified. I'll hug my pillow much too tight-- for dreams cannot compare with life. So now return me, unto crypt, until you make me live again. Awaiting silken spark of lips-- a fairy tale begs to begin. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You know what? You wrote this for me, whether you knew it or not. But this time, the fairytale's coming true. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Oh, this is such rapturous work! I really like it!! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karen, Gotta watch those friends, huh? LOL! Enjoyed much.  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Once upon a time.. we begin the dream again. Fabulous Pepper |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Speaking of which dreamland awaits me...what a nice ending to a time well spent at Passions and yours being the last one sending me to a dream. Nice Karen. The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"For dreams cannot compare with life..." How true it is... Nicely said, serene one..  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Dreams may never compare to reality, for dreams are far more harmonious, but very soon and always your fairy-tale will come true and true love will sing to your heart always! (kiss on cheek) This is filled with such rapture, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow, wasn't what I thought from the title! This has a deep yearning. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My hands still smell of your cologne. I lick my lips and taste your smile. I close my eyes to keep you close-- I hear your voice across the miles. No. I will not sleep tonight. (I love you.) I am terrified. I'll hug my pillow much too tight-- for dreams cannot compare with life. ===================================== oh damn ... damn damn damn *sigh*  You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You haven't been kissing frogs again, have you Well done. Romantically enticing. I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This line, I especially enjoyed... "I close my eyes to keep you close" |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Dreams can never compare to a real love, although they are a great comfort at times. sky |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My hands still smell of your cologne. I lick my lips and taste your smile. I close my eyes to keep you close-- I hear your voice across the miles. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Karen!! My oh my...can you tell it like it is!! Love this, yup I sure do! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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