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This Love, Born On A Breeze Over Water
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This Love, Born On A Breeze Over Water |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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This love, born of fresh breeze over still waters Living from sunrise to moon’s fall under stars. Growing as the wildest flower blooms anew. Given to last eternal, past time of pyramids. Can I not experience the softness of the breeze. The flow of the pure waters within the soul. The delicate dew upon the moistest of lips. Touch of shivers born of a race to infinity. Let my taste be graced by love’s nectar. My eyes feel the silhouette of your face. Live as if each moment the last, forever. Love with the fervor of youth, vitality. Take my dream as yours, sleep passionately. Hold me as though I leave, wrested away. Laugh with my breath as you would breathe. Sing a soft tune, a melody of moon’s light. Whisper of the moment when hearts meld. When soul and mind are of one, not two. When life is of the dream, becomes real. When all is, all remains and all will be. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, my friend, are having a wonderful time...and your poetry shows it! Write on! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry I firmly believe that you should be crowned the "King of Romance". This was absolutely beautiful. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ I like the entire movement of this piece~ Gently caressing your thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romantic perfection....you just keep me sighing...Well done, Magnus...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Born on a breeze - airy subject  Well done! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy you are always a fabulous writing in this piece you’ve excelled yourself Oh my eyes have been blessed this is utterly utterly gorgeous. I love this darling boy utterly adore it.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This love, born of fresh breeze over still waters Living from sunrise to moon’s fall under stars. Growing as the wildest flower blooms anew. Given to last eternal, past time of pyramids. Oh Mr Valentino..this is soooo lovely.. enjoyed~Victoria~ "Silence is a friend who |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, you can get a sigh out of me faster than anyone I know....*s* well, almost anyone I know.  Excellent romantic write my friend, Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may all you have become all you will hold and cherish forever and may true love always radiate in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, this is so beautiful, love this verse "Whisper of the moment when hearts meld. When soul and mind are of one, not two. When life is of the dream, becomes real. When all is, all remains and all will be." very romantic, floriaFloria |
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