Open Poetry #18 |
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Enough to Make a Mornings Dew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Enough to Make a Mornings Dew The world continues round its core. I cannot make the sun to store My dragon paces in my dream He dares me to a full extreme. He wearies of esthetic flight And would surcease of dreamer’s night A trip around the maypole please A feel a touch a little tease. He would the sun to shine on thee Before my eyes that I can see Within my field of visions wheel And steal for me a moment feel. I would my fingers gently trace Your face your lips your gentle space. A fragile touch that I can steal A moment of eternals real A wisp of hair a prop of true Will-o’-the wisp a drop of dew. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I DEW love this piece, my dear Sy... You're a wonder - How do you manage to write soooo much soooo well??... ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I just spend a little time gathering dew. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
then upon the morning's dew my friend the sun shall shine with never-end a bit of crystal clarity some shine for Randy's Sy, you see let not the dragon cease his roar but more like Puff had done before, find sealing wax and bits of string I hear raspberry tea is just the thing! then find the moth who on wing would come to hear one heart so sing and in her poem you'll find the rhyme if you give it plenty of time... so in the dew drops seek the sheen of all of your and Randy's dreams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, One for you ![]() ![]() and one for good measure ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He wearies of esthetic flight And would surcease of dreamer’s night A trip around the maypole please A feel a touch a little tease. He would the sun to shine on thee Before my eyes that I can see Within my field of visions wheel And steal for me a moment feel. I would my fingers gently trace Your face your lips your gentle space. A fragile touch that I can steal A moment of eternals real =================================== oh my!!! ... my my my ... OH Sy!!! ... sigh sigh sigh. Me thinks its not the tea making me high, this puts more than winkies in my eye!! You wrap me in your rhymes and such, You touch me with your "touchless touch". (never doubt, it means so much) *winkiewinkie* ![]() ![]() *smiling at you Stinky* ![]() *you too sunshine* ![]() *you too Randy* ![]() You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Then I'll touch you with a touchless touch. And make of it the such of much. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thanks. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sy You romantic you - I love it! "I would my fingers gently trace Your face your lips your gentle space. A fragile touch that I can steal A moment of eternals real" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ariana, Yes I am, thank you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely, romantic poem, Sy. ![]() Hi Randy! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhh I love Mornings Dew....and I do love your romantic piece.*sigh*....love it...as always ![]() Charisma |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dew you know how cool this is? I want some warm sunshine, but I do love the dew too. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Sy.. what a guy dew for two sounds like my cup of brew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Madame C, ![]() Charisma, My thanks go with a ![]() Midnitesun, How about a ![]() Martie, I'll drink to that. ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet frind, your gorgeous words always make me sigh and smile! (big hugggssssss) May your heart forever be touched by the beauty of true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you and glad you enjoyed. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour I could copy and paste your whole poem here to make a point, but I will just say, it is entirely wonderful. ![]() Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, All I could give you back for that sweet is a ![]() |
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