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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-02-06 09:05 PM



Find for me an oasis
in this desert
baskets of fruit filled passion
that absorb the heat & quenches
all fires that burn deep within
offer me the wine of love
erases all tears my tears & doubts
Come dearest lover,
be my oasis...  

~Tier
2/8/99

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-02-06 09:07 PM


Very beautiful and refreshing. Thanks for sharing.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-02-06 09:09 PM


Thank you, Newell...

*smiles*

~Tier

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-02-06 09:56 PM


Tiersdin - liked your write. Pleasing to read with a lot of meaning...

BC

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-02-06 09:56 PM


very very nice...
good to see you again *s

M

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5 posted 2002-02-06 10:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may your love always drink from your hearts oasis with joy as you will always drink from your loves heart in eternity! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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6 posted 2002-02-06 11:05 PM


Ah yes, don’t we all look forward to an oasis like that? And, when we find it, we should just take it and not question where it came from. Nice to see you back again Tier.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Tiersdin
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7 posted 2002-02-06 11:46 PM


Thank you, Bill, Nakdthoughts, Noah, & Tracey, your comments are truly appreciated...

*smiles*

~Tier

Honeybee
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8 posted 2002-02-07 12:50 PM



I love this!  It's going into my library

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-02-07 12:53 PM


Thank you, Miss Honeybee! *smiles* I'm deeply flattered!

~Tier

Larry C
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10 posted 2002-02-07 12:54 PM


Tier,
An awesome invitation. Loved the analogy.

Duncan
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11 posted 2002-02-07 01:35 AM


It is intoxicating, isn't it?
Tiersdin
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12 posted 2002-02-07 07:53 AM


Thank you, Larry C, I'm glad you liked...

Indeed it is, Duncan, there's nothing like it...

*smiles*
~Tier

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13 posted 2002-02-07 10:14 AM



I don't know where you've been, but I'm glad you're back!

Victoria
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14 posted 2002-02-07 10:39 AM


I enjoyed your words..a sweet oasis indeed..nicely done  

              ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2002-02-07 11:08 AM


the love oasis
it is not made up of me
it is made of WE

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-02-07 12:03 PM


A fill in the barren land.  Speaking to the heart.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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