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Lonely |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Here I stand so alone. I wonder if I`ll ever have a stable home. People walk by and they don`t even smile. So why should I feel my life is worthwhile? No one looks or says a word. Or if they did I had not heard. I watch the birds as they fly by. I have to ask myself why me why? Then I realize I have a job to do. Then I tell the crows to go away or I`ll get you. I`m just a scarecrow all alone. With only a cornpatch to call my home.   Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart cries out to your lonely heart but I know deep down you will always be surrounded by many that love you and sparrows and doves of freindship will always perch upon your shoulders and greet you always with loves song! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I never thought of them that way.Now I will be sure to speak to them next time.Very nice mama! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
North Carolina Girl - a poem only as a girl from North Carolina Girl can write... BC |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,thanks so much I`m sure the scarecrow appreciates it.  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,thanks now don`t forget to speak to them.  Love you! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,thanks friend!  Juanita |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Juanita this is so bittersweet, I have written like this , You did a great job here of expressing lonliness. floriaFloria "Alas for those that never sing, But die with all their music in them" (Oliver Wendell Holmes) [This message has been edited by strbbux (02-06-2002 01:10 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I am not sure if I should laugh or cry...at first this poem had me crying for all the lonely people but then you gave me such a giggling....Well done. BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I really like this a LOT! Nice work! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Aw Juanita, I'm a crow and you don't scare me. one little bit! LOL...In fact, all you did was to scare me into writing a poem for you. It's posted on a dfferent thread. It's called, "I won"! ((Juanita)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,I have no idea why i thought about a scarecrow.Maybe it is because they look so lonely.Thanks friend!  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,I`m glad it ended up making you giggle.Thanks friend!  Juanita |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is so neat!! When I first started reading it, I thought it was going to be about a bum on the street. Very cool write. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Michael,I`m glad you liked it!Thanks for reading.  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Newell,thank you my dear friend!  Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
RoseOetal,I`m so glad you liked it.Thanks for reading friend!  Juanita |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Juanita...this is really good! Your poetry breathed life into this scarecrow!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
lyra,thank you so much!TAKE CARE!   Juanita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NorthCarolinaGirl~ REALLY cute ! I've been speaking to them for years - they smile back~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Juanita - It took me almost an hour for my computer to download your poem because of all the graphics. I am really mad now.   Only you could make me feel bad for a scarecrow. Great write. Dave |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Juanita, I saw the title and I was worried about you. But I'm okay now! Cute. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I see your scarecrowis not empty headed at all and I think some of this clip art is far out!  |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,its nice to know everyone don`t slight the scarecrow.Thanks for reading! Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Dave,its about darn time you showed back up.I`ve missed you and quit complaining about my graphics.You know they`re cute.It doesn`t take a hour for my computer to load my poems.I think you need a new computer.  Don`t be gone so long the next time.Your down south friend Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Larry,thanks for caring yeah I`m fine its the poor old scarecrow thats sad.  Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (02-07-2002 06:17 AM).] |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Martin,no this is a pretty smart scarecrow.I`m glad you like the graphics.They are so much fun to do.  Juanita |
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