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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Toast on a bright day, and an egg flipped over some bacon on the side for the rover crispy fries and a shake to put together this is not a poem about food or the weather. toast between friends, the night is not over olive stuck to the glass and a pinch of lemon would that I had the key to the gates of heaven this is not a poem about drink or redemption. Working men bake loaves that customarily rise copycats fake their way with their daily disguise; candlestick makers pour molten wax into molds not a poem about candlelit dough you should fold. What then is in the sea of my mind can you not just turn around and find; that whoever you are, you are not walking alone and all of these acts are at a throw of a stone. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-07-2002 01:00 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I felt completely tumbled and polished by your ramblings...really neat write ec!! Kat |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I modified the line on the baker to widen its appeal  |
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