Open Poetry #18 |
My Girl |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is for my Guinevere...Joanna, who made 2000 posts today, and is the girl of my dreams!!!) My Girl (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/2/01 My girl, Oh, the way you shimmer The way you spin and twirl Oh, the way your hair waves and your eyes glimmer My girl, my dream Oh, the beauty of your words Buzzes around e like a small cloud of honeybees Oh, the sweetest words I have ever heard My girl, my love Oh, the sweetness of your smile Your soft silky hair spreading the light from above Watching you sway with the wind, out in my heavens meadow My girl My one true love is you My girl Your love sighs within my heart, sweet and true [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-06-2002 08:23 PM).] |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Noah this is just some great writing at its finest. Your love is very strong i see. I hope these feelings never change between you too. Great job buddy, I just loved this!!! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
Loving the poem..ur always so romantic *sigh* ..im in my anti romantic mood hehe....i found a new phrase i love but i aint gonna share it cuz some people would drop dead of a heart attack hehe byes! Tifferz {}{}uG$ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwww for ME?!!! Darling, you are gushing with emotion, and it shows in your A++++ writing Noah, I'm still sick with 101 fever..I need ya to come baby me til I am better. |
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