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Open Poetry #18

Coming in for a Landing

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-02-06 06:17 PM

big wings flappin'
the canada geese slid
honk...honk....honking....
across the frozen pond
a space research facility
my winter of artificial light
reading into every word
pure pleasure
pure delight
and baby it is so bewildering
yet flowering
in the midst of showering
enlightment
open-up!!!
don't ever hide in plain sight.....Mark

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2002-02-06 06:44 PM

Mark welcome to Passions. Thank you for a very good poem.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-06 07:51 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love canadian geese, they're soooo cute and I just love the honking sounds they make as they all fly together in graceful form! (big hugggssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so uch! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-02-06 07:58 PM

reading into every word
pure pleasure
pure delight
and baby it is so bewildering

Oh yes, don't I know it!
Wowser, this was fantastic!

Honk honk!!

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