Open Poetry #18 |
Unspoken........... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
He looked into my eyes spoke to my heart without sound made it all so clear no need to expound His eyes held the depth of an emotional eternity raging storms of devotion passionate intensity It was there in his smile in his warm possessing embrace he told me everything when he gently touched my face In a lifetime of words a thousand books of poetry could never say as much as his touch did to me ~SEA~ with all that you are... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! 1derful, gal! I love it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet freind, I love it, your words of loves touch are far more vivid than a million poetry books! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In a lifetime of words a thousand books of poetry could never say as much as his touch did to me ================================= there you have it and there you are. when a muse inspires in this way .... words would be wasted You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Romantic and lovely... enjoyed! !Tier |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a lovely romantic poem and the picture captures it also, well done, Susan. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue...this is BEAUTIFUL!!....Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In a lifetime of words a thousand books of poetry could never say as much as his touch did to me Today...I understand this in a way I couldn't have before. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Awww...so much of warmth your words have, Susan, great inspire you're having now... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Magnificent!! Truly some of your best work. (((hugs))) me Michael Auguste~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Absolutely amazing Susan!! you've captured it perfectly.. for some very perfect times, words are actually redundant... Pepper |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
A touch speaks a thousand words, to hear a voice and to be touched - you are truely special to someone. Hugs Fee Expressions, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!What an incredible way of putting it...I love this poem...powerful...emotional and filled with loving passion...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
mm..yeah...this is wonderful....!! sometimes..no words can convey... enjoyed! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A longtime friend and I share a standing joke... that one day he's going to tell me what he really thinks of me. *G* Nineteen plus years... I'm still waiting. LOL But as your poem states so beautifully... sometimes words aren't necessary. *S* This is very lovely! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
SEA-girl - This is a very sweet poem that could only be written by a woman. You expressed yourself so beautifully. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, This is a lovely. Excellent write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you, each of you so much.....sometimes with love, there are no words....only emotions. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
There is nothing like the touch of someone you love, and you have conveyed that well, Sue. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
And away! Up! Up! |
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