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Coming Dawn
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Coming Dawn |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“COMING DAWN” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Sleeping, and I stare, my whisper peaceful… Kiss of lips awaken, eyes I see, adorable… Warm is your touch, embraces dreamy… Lying here together, closely, with you… Sun not breaking, early is the morn… Love to make, into coming dawn… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever beat with loves happiness ever sunrise and sunset for the rest of your life, we all love you so much! (big hugggssssss) I would be delighted to write a funny animal duet with you, just let me know your ideas and well start! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is adorable! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-06-2002 12:20 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* mmmm oh yes.....this is the way to wake up...it is a lucky lady who can wake up held within such gently passionate arms...Magnificent...  makes me want to go back to bed but *sigh* there is no one there to wake me in this wonderful way...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,wonderfully romantic!   Juanita |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
You do these so very well Bill, You ought to write Valentine cards...very romantic. floriaFloria |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
So romantic and tender... wonderful! ~Tier |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the dawn, almost as much as your words, BC a very nice one today hugs M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oooh what a treat this poem was! thank you for sharing this bill, I love it. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh that was so beautiful, Bill...very romantic!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Bill this is so romantic penned, truly a treat to read~~~~*sigh*~~~love it! Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'Sun not breaking, early is the morn… Love to make, into coming dawn…' To *sigh* for~ And so, I do~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy Oh my eyes have been blessed this is utterly utterly gorgeous. I love this darling boy utterly adore it. You are always the perfect choice for romance writer this is excellent Absolutely first class writing, This really is one of your utter best   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ I can only S i g h to this....lovely words... Lauren~ Step through the |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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