Open Poetry #18 |
Ode To The Toyboy, or Why I’m Keeping My Signature Line |
Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ode To The Toyboy, or Why I’m Keeping My Signature Line Some of you may wonder why I keep my old sig line For now I have my duncan, and he really is devine I’m collecting no more toy boys, but I keep the memory For you see I find my signature means so much more to me He’d seen me on these pages, and wondered what to do So one day this dear boy had had his share of rum or two And so set out to pen a rhyme, he called that one “toy boy” Invited me onto the swings, thought he was being coy But being quite the dense one, as I sometimes can be I really didn’t think this poem he penned was meant for me Until that lady midnitesun, she sent to me a mail “Do you see he’s put a poem for you, answer him, don’t fail” He thought he was so subtle, thought that no one else would know (It wasn’t til much later I told him kacy’d told me so) And so I set to put an answer to his lively rhyme And told him it would be such fun to swing with him this time The next night he did e-mail.. once again egged on by rum We had no clue what would come of the friendship we’d begun We talked of cars and other stuff, I swear I rambled like a loon But he thought it was cute and said lets talk again real soon Well friends most of you know by now that he has stole my heart And I ain’t gonna let him go…at least I am that smart And so I keep my sig for it’s a memory to me Of how a simple toy boy rhyme became a love story If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! YIPPEE!!! (BIG HUGGGGSSSSSS) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SUCH DELIGHTFUL NEWS, I LOVE IT, WE'RE ALL SOOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! (smiles) I know just how happy you feel, me and Joanna (RosePetal) have met here at Passions too and we have fallen deeply in love with each other and are so very close to meeting each other! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy to hear this, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS!!! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Tracey, this is wonderful. Good for you! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan will love this, best wishes on you romance |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is simply awesome..Love the flow of the poem...and is cute!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah sweet Tracey! You know how much I love this!! Now I understand why you want to keep the sig. You go right ahead and I won't tease you anymore about it okay? You know I love ya and wish you and Duncan all the best! *email me whenever you want* ~Magical smiles and hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling* ... Well then...I take back my "honk" that a "certain someone" asked for in reference to the sig LOL and? me thinks Toys R Us needs to design you a "Duncan" doll...ROFL ... I mean..a Duncan ACTION FIGURE hey I KNOW!!! ...A Duncan blow up doll ERRRR never mind Keep the sig...keep the poet Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And they lived happily ever after.... Sandra |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, as long as that Duncan toy is not a yo-yo I'm with ya! It is fantastic that the two of you found each other, especially through your love of poetry......I wish you both the absolute best! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Tracey This was wonderful and I wish you nothing but the best for a life filled with love and happiness. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Noah, thanks so much you sweetie. I never thought when I came here that I would find love…but, I guess as the old saying goes, “when you least expect it”. And I’m so happy for you and your lovely Joanna. Some matches are just made in heaven. Newell, thank you so much. I live with a perma grin these days. Hey Walker, yeah I think he will. I told him last night that I had a poem for him, but that he’d have to wait til tonight to see it. The suspense is killing him Magnus, thanks for that. Glad you stopped in my friend Nancy, yep, that’s why I’m keeping it….oh yeah…and to keep him on his toes too!!! Rofl at you JM. A Duncan blow up doll…now who do I talk to about one of those??? I bet it’s a heck of a lot quieter than the real thing And yep, I’ll keep the sig…and I’ll keep the poet!! Sandra, you know…I think they will. Thanks for that sweetie. Michael, well, he’s no yo-yo…just a bit nuts, but, that’s just how I like him, he cracks me up all the time. And you know, it still amazes me how we met...though, I’m just glad we did. Hey Sue, nice to see you here. Thanks for the wishes my friend If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hi Trace You know by now that my responses to your poems are never quite as perfect as yours are to mine. And I'm always a bit late. But you also know what this means to me. And so I will simply say...we'll talk about this day, many years from now. We'll tell folks just how we started out. And we will laugh and love and we will...everything we've dreamed of. I love you. Thanks for playin' with me, darlin! I'll swing ya, anytime! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Trace, What a very fun write. Wow...the power of poetry (and a little rum)! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, Tracey, I have to agree, keep that sig line. And thanks for putting me into this poem. It really was a magical moment in time. I am so happy for both of you! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm a sucker for a happy ending!! What a great love story! You have to love that rum!! cheers to you both! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Forgot, I'd wanted to respond to the content of your poem, Trace. You know that I've never thought you should change your sig, I think it's cute...like you! Though, I am glad to hear ya won't be collecting anymore toy boys, darlin. And Janet Marie, what my one day sig said was, 'honk...if you think Tracey's got enough toy boys'. Like she said, if it hadn't been for her sig, I would never have written that first silly poem for her. Oh and, I love the idea of a Duncan action figure! A superhero that writes poetry. I love it! |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Tracey!! YAY!! I loved this piece, your work is always so stunning. Keep up the amazing job ~~Jeff~~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Really great and really wonderful, Tracey. It just goes to show you that the best time to find love is when you're not looking for it. I'm happy for both of you and I hope you both have a wonderful Valentine's Day. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
When his name is mentioned, I've seen the excitement in your eyes. I wish you both the best. *hugs* my friend Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah Dunc, you know I always love your responses. And yes, what a great story it will be. Love you darlin Larry, thank god for the power of rum and poetry!! Kacy, yes, it was a magical moment…and thank you so much for pointing it out when I was being dense. We both owe you a big hug Blue, yes, I’m a sucker for a happy ending too…even more so when it’s my own. And yeah, love that rum too…even though I don’t drink it!!! Lol Ah, my darlin Dunc again…no, I think one toy boy is enough…especially when he’s such a handful as you are!!! Lmao….and yeah, you’re my superhero writing poetry Jbaker, thank you for that lovely comment…I do appreciate it muchly Michael, yes my friend, you have indeed. At the time, even I didn’t think it would turn out as well as it has. Hugs to you too my friend If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
bumping back *bump* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Congratulations to you both... may your happiness never falter. *S* I enjoyed this saga of your beginning. *S* |
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