Open Poetry #18 |
Snow Clouds |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“SNOW CLOUDS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Grey are the skies, everywhere they partake… High on this mountain, passions reawake… Cold winds on my face, penetrating skin… Shivers in my spine, cleansing to begin… You capture my mind, new, not the past… Wanting to know, if this will last… Snow clouds I see, hearts beat in the mist… Embracing is warm, pain leaving, dismissed… ~~~~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhha yes....this is great BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty, BC! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A delicate write here, I enjoyed very much. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I'm so happy to hear you're happy, such hope and optimism fills these words as white as snow! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very very nice idea here with the snow clouds Bill. I love it, floria Floria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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