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Unified brevity and free verse attempt #2
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Unified brevity and free verse attempt #2 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~Unified~ United As one We breathe together One flesh one heart One United Combined As one Merged into being Two flames become One Combined Fused As one Blended mixed Unified into One Fused Marsha I’m ambiguous about this, brevity and free verse I shall keel over from the shock. If you absolutely loathe this just let it sink into oblivion. To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let it sink? I think not! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Look at you flexing your poetic self~ Beautifully done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh..this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, who in the world would ever want to sink this timeless gem? (kiss on cheek) I love it, I love it, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always speak with delightful love, we all love you so mcuh! BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Marsha - Am I at the right site? Have I entered the Twilight Zone? You, writing free verse. I never thought I'd see the day(lol), but I am glad I have. Well done. I knew it was you when I saw the pink bubble wording, and then I finally convinced myself it had to be you.lol  Dave |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, It was the title that got me. Thought for a moment it was an oximoron. You know...brevity aaaaaand Marsha. Sorry I couldn't help myself! Lose the disclaimer sweetie. You don't need it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart Yes darling heart sink into oblivion mourned by no one least of all me. I only did this because I was asked to try it. You know me and rhyme if it doesn’t rhyme then I dismiss it, well I do if I’ve written it Thank you darling heart, it will however sink without trace   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie darling sister of my heart Thank you darling girl I’ve stretched and will now return to doing what I prefer Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you muchly I can always rely on you to be biased in my favour. YOU always say such nice things to me, now, that’s not a lot to ask from you is it? Mmmmm? And you are always so welcome darling boy you are a superior writer Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dave darling boy Thank you muchly, and yes that’s how you know it’s me if it’s pink and bubbly But free verse isn’t really something I’m any good at, still at least it didn’t make anyone cry. Free verse, brevity and tears I couldn’t stand Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy thank you muchly it is rather an oxymoron isn’t it? And not really something I’m any good at. But if you think my lines are long now you should have seen how I used to write. I’ll repost one for you if you like then you’d see long and I mean long lines As for the disclaimer it’s true this will vanish without a trace and won’t even have a brief moment of glory. And since it does I won't have to do it again, especially since it's about as popular as a dose of ........ chickenpox. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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