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nichole2005
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 20

0 posted 2002-01-04 11:20 AM

I lay here adn watch you sleep
So peaceful
Dreeaming of the wonders of the world
Your heart shaped lips
So precious
You lay there
In perfect harmony
Even though you can't say it
I know you love me
And sometimes I don't show it
But I love you too
Words unsaid
Thoughts unknown
A simple smile,
Hug,
Or even a
Kiss shwos it all
I love you my little angel
Brought from heaven above
To touch my life in so many ways
You shoed me how to be loved
And how to love
You showed my Joy
And Happiness
When we are far apart
Or even close together
A simple glance says it all
More than words themselves!

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

1 posted 2002-01-04 11:23 AM

Hey Nichole-welcome to the forums! This poem is really great! It's so sweet too! I hope to hear more poems from you in the future!! luv amanda

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-04 11:25 AM

*sigh* this is so wonderuflly heartfelt...so gentle and tender filled with the best kind of love. Welcome to Passions....I look forward to seeing more of your work. I can tell I will enjoy reading them. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-01-04 11:37 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-01-04 03:09 PM

Welcome to the blue pages. Love is a wonderful theme, probably the most popular one in here.

PS, the edit option lets you fix those typos. Click on that little box with the blue line and pencil, edit adn to and, and swhos? to shows, and shoed to showed. And have fun here!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-04-2002 03:12 PM).]

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

5 posted 2002-01-04 04:59 PM

Nichole,

Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed your poem. I hope you enjoy it here.

~Laura~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-04 05:08 PM

Nichole..this is a most tender and touching
poem...Surely that child will be loved so
well...Welcome to Passions...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-01-04 05:41 PM

I felt every line of this tender poem.
Welcome to passions, I'm sure you will absolutely love it here.

RP

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-01-04 07:48 PM

Very nice first post!
Have a look around and get acquainted.
I'll be looking forward to more of your work.
~Hugs, NancyLee~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-01-04 08:39 PM

CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh Nichole, this is soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are sooooooooo romantic! (sigh) What a lovely and romantic poem to debut with! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nichole, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

10 posted 2002-01-04 09:57 PM

How well you have expressed, the one true, absolutely faithful love...

Keep 'em coming!!!

Hugs,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

11 posted 2002-01-04 10:09 PM

Wonderful, very nice, beautifully written so much emotion. Will look forward to reading more from you

Julie

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

12 posted 2002-01-05 07:37 AM

Welcome to Passion's!
Lovely tenderhearted poem. Enjoyed.

Deb

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2002-01-05 07:53 AM

Nichole,
Welcome to Passions. Nice entrance you've made with this one. Check your typing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

14 posted 2002-01-05 10:13 AM

Welcome to the family! I would also like to see you fix your errors. This is a lovely poem.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-01-05 10:38 AM

Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more from you (and less typos)

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

16 posted 2002-01-05 10:44 AM

I love it.

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