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At Seventh Moon's Set
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At Seventh Moon's Set |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The orb of night has set ‘gainst yon mount high. Thy presence has not graced my heart, my eye. Wilt thee not come into the light of the morn? Doth thee see my heart at thy feet, lying torn? I come to thee in beg of thy grace, thy beauty. Wilt thee not show thyself for mine eyes to see? My journ from afar doth tire me, I am worn. Can thee not share thy bed, if only till morn? Nay maid, tho mine heart doth love thee well. Mine eyes shall not see thy skin, lips not tell. Thy chastity I covet, my sin shall not touch. I cherish thee all, doth thee know this much? I beg thee know thou art my one true love. Mine soul carries thee from highest above. Upon rise of the morn’s sun I then beseech till seven moons set, I remain without speech. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* filled with mystical romance of the very best kind...This poem transported me to a kingdom where love is charished and romance is enjoyed...*sigh* BRAVO!!!Oh gosh this one goes into my library....where I will read it and weave dreams of my own. I love it..*big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You truly are our Modern Shakespeare without a doubt, sweet friend, your lovely words again make the moon rise and fall with the ascending of loves true bliss! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like this style very much, keep it going! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Mystical, magical and romantic, Barry... Beautifully written!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - the style and you go together well. I like it I do.... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Well .. the title grabbed my mouse and pulled me in~ Very nicely done, sir~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You are definately the ultimate gentleman and it is soo incredibly expressed in this piece. I agree, this style really suits you!! Kat |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
There's magic in your pen.. I know it!!! What a lovely, beautiful, romantic write... I think too I will keep this to read again and again and let it take me to a different place Pepper |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Magnus,I couldn`t write a poem like this for anything.This was so wonderful!  Juanita |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow you are really getting into this style Magnus, great write here, enjoyed it much. floria Floria |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
Filled with hearts week-est desire ... expectation!!! Another masters piece of thought. Well done, Barry. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ooohhhhhh, love your new style, you truly write like a classic! Love it! Joanna |
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