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February Cried
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February Cried |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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February Cried it was a cold lonely morning and February cried the chill of the moment met the warmth of me inside would it be a day so different from the months of any other no, so I pulled the cold around my skin and placed one foot in front of the other I started out in searching just to be on my way but became frozen here in my steps cemented so I had to stay I screamed out in my panic a blood curdling curl but an echo was all that I heard when I let my voice unfurl I was all alone at dawn no one else was around and I finally heard the beauty of not even a sound there is a calming song when the world is fast asleep a crisp peace in its own soul with no secrets to keep special was the day frozen here for my ride the melody of sweet silence on the morning February cried "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words always make me smile and sigh, there's no sound more prettier than golden serenity! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* This poem is stunningly beautiful...I love the whole feel of it...incredible...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This is simply beautiful. There is a lot here, and I love the way you are saying it all. I am many. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - I'm sorry that February cried. You do write them well and a lot of meaning... BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I know the feeling, Helen, know it well.  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful in a way that only you could write. Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done Helen! Enjoyed this as I do everything you write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
Reminded me of Dr. Zhivago. Great images . thanks |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
God, This is Great!!!! I mean it..... |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I love the vibes this one sends.Exceelent work here. Peaches |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow Helen.. you have written this with such a peacefulness and so much depth.. I have enjoyed so much what you write.. this is certainly no exception Pepper |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bump bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Yay, I love this just as I love everything else you write, this is wonderful! Joanna |
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